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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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On spirit wings one yearns to fly flight spree divested of consumed lies conscience free... The owl played his mandolin an enthralled cat mused at the stars both wondered where the people had been how a Tsunami wave had swept them so far on spirited wings one rises above the calamity to see an infernal progress delayed by humanity the cat whispered about avarice in the owl's ears owl returned to strum away their collected fears He sang "feels good to give money from the heart but its unlike real aid which uneasily departs when roads to disaster victims are still to be made count on real aid for victims to eventually fade"! On spirit wings disaster relief flies but real local assistance slowly fries In reference to countries consumed by internal division, little reason exists for central governments to diffuse provisions. The owl played his music into the night the owl and pussycat sailed out of sight their trip was financed by a 5 note bill concern for relief was a question of will. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
This is so well done - point well written Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
thanks Susan! one goes with the inspiration and the moment...I'm breathing new life into old nursery rhymes and people are still left to rot on abandoned sea shores while most of think our money is getting where it has to.. at that point would just love to ignore the Indonesian government and drop my care packages directly to the disaster victims. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Very powerful. Eric |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, how those suffering souls must be just hanging on ... wondering ... where is the help we need? Awesome write once again. Chris ~The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze~ |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Very nice...  ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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