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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-10-25 07:11 PM



I age the less the more of time
And bring with me the morn of rhyme
To wile away the seed of me
And lift the day to pleasures be

I climb the walls to reach the top
A tease, a taunt, to never stop
For age is just a "feel of when"
(I like my tea to share and then)

It is the morn, I specialize
To whisper shine to all, surmise
I am the fuel to start each day
And wise the tries in nature's way

I link from blue to blue to rose
To many here I do propose
In words to spirit, gently touch
For here it is I love "the much"

And always leave two lines behind
Here within, I am defined

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2004-10-25 07:12 PM


Cant fool me, if this aint Seymour I'll be darned....
well done M!!

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Magnus
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2 posted 2004-10-25 07:13 PM


who else but our SY.......gotta be, can't
be another....and you wrote it perfectly!

wranx
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3 posted 2004-10-25 07:14 PM


You can't hide Seymore...Ya musta stole Maureens password!

Nicely done, indeed!

And thanks for playing!

Enchantress
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4 posted 2004-10-25 07:14 PM


Oh so well done Maureen!
Tis our very own morning Sy guy!

Sunshine
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5 posted 2004-10-25 07:16 PM


You gave just the right clues!  
Terrific, Maureen!  Sy will love it!  

nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2004-10-25 07:17 PM


hmmmm....there are so few of us that do rhyme consistantly in a pattern ...guess I didn't hide him well enough


but who would want to

thank you for allowing me to rhyme a bit today...

hugs all
M

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7 posted 2004-10-25 07:22 PM


LOL, that IS SY! *sigh* and no one has ever rhymed him better than you just did Maureen!
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
8 posted 2004-10-25 07:25 PM


You make me smile~~~

thank you for the responses...

and thank you SY (I always read and enjoy you)


M

littlewing
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9 posted 2004-10-25 07:45 PM


As I began to read, I felt I should have my tea by my side, what a beautiful job you have done writing SY, Maureen!
Dark Angel
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10 posted 2004-10-25 07:47 PM


You did a great job here Maureen

Well DOne.

Mxx

and I am haunted
by my illicit exquisite dream
but I can't really wake up
so I just drift in between

~ani difranco~

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11 posted 2004-10-25 08:10 PM










What the...? Sorry, Maureen, for a second I thought you were seymour!



Great job.

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