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exhale
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since 2003-06-13
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Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2004-10-25 03:23 PM


the flood lights from your truck blind me
as i climb into this beat up old chevy
with the heater on
theres nothing but silence
i wish you could read my mind right now
and understand that words would flow from my mouth
if there was any to say

your breathing becomes counted
and i know your trying not to think of me
understand i love you
i love you more than my foreign heartbeat
i love you more than the smell of coffee in the morning
i love you more than the sound of snow falling
i love you more than the beginning of a book

my heart is pounding in my ears
the silence is overwhelming
and my breathing seems to stop
as the engine turs off
you boots move without you in them
your soul is left behind
sometimes i love you just isn't enough..


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Gaia
1 posted 2004-10-25 04:59 PM


a sad blues tune, complete with crushing silence
JamesMichael
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2 posted 2004-10-25 08:33 PM


I've noticed that...James
passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2004-10-25 08:38 PM


gawd...
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