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wranx
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Moved from a shack to a barn

0 posted 2004-10-25 11:22 AM


the willow
tangle of her hair
blew warm
across her hunger eyes
when she sighed herself
onto my lap
raising her smiling skirt
"hello"
revealing pearly
kiss me thighs

Oh, yah....and a HUGE apology to the poet!

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1 posted 2004-10-25 11:24 AM


well now, I COULD guess, but will let this one alone for now and see what the others say....
but I am SMILING huge here....
well done Wranx....

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Enchantress
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2 posted 2004-10-25 11:25 AM


Oooh this is a good one Ed.

My guess is Dark Stranger...but then again...
humm....

Well done whomever's mask you are wearing.

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

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3 posted 2004-10-25 11:25 AM



What a party...

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4 posted 2004-10-25 11:41 AM


its sensual like dark stranger, but..hmmmm
yes, its him...

its got sultry written all over it!

lovely

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5 posted 2004-10-25 03:34 PM


wranx
A moment is a moment, LOL some are better than others.

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6 posted 2004-10-25 03:48 PM


  Dark

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7 posted 2004-10-25 03:48 PM


I see a Mr Dark here

and I am haunted
by my illicit exquisite dream
but I can't really wake up
so I just drift in between

~ani difranco~

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8 posted 2004-10-25 05:12 PM


Yup, those pearly kiss me thighs is for sure, through the Dark Stranger's eyes!
Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2004-10-25 06:42 PM


wish I had said that...

some cool eye views in this guy!!

enjoyed it!!

whoever that charactor is

wranx
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10 posted 2004-10-25 06:43 PM


OOPS!

Sorry dude

LOL

Susan
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11 posted 2004-10-25 06:58 PM


I didn't even have to scroll down to see the replies before knowing this stranger is no stranger at all

Susan

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12 posted 2004-10-25 07:15 PM


Dark, dark ....definitely dark...

done very well, for sure.

littlewing
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13 posted 2004-10-25 07:49 PM


D-A-R-K
*smile*

well done, Eddie
You have challenged your own challenge!

[This message has been edited by littlewing (10-25-2004 08:35 PM).]

JamesMichael
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14 posted 2004-10-25 08:32 PM


Enjoyed...James
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15 posted 2004-10-25 08:46 PM


*beaming at you both*

and adjusting my nightie...

there now, can ya'll both see better?





Well done Ed!

Aenimal
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16 posted 2004-10-25 09:45 PM


excellent work, so um, when are you two duetting?

babygirlwlove
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17 posted 2004-10-25 09:49 PM


had me fooled...LOL

great stuff...
**babygirL**

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

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18 posted 2004-10-25 10:08 PM


DARK for sure.....and what a write ED!

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