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MGROVES
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0 posted 2004-10-25 08:56 AM




i hear
their whispers
when the sun
goes down
i see
their shadows
dancing
all around

i see
his words
upon the wall
i see
the giants
in the trees
so big and tall

i see
three faces
smiling at me
one with
white hair and beard
others are dark
who can they be?

at first glance
i can read
the words fine
when i look back
foreign to me
something way back
in time

i see
their shapes
amongst the trees
even in pictures
their shown
to me

i must know
what this means
so focus
with all
plus dreams

let no
one distract me
as plenty before
i hear the waves
callin as they come to shore

i see a city
as never before
as i let my soul
pass above
through the door


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LeeJ
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1 posted 2004-10-25 09:04 AM


amazing as is your heart!
MGROVES
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2 posted 2004-10-25 09:15 AM


thank you. your someone i really respect and your replies mean alot to me


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3 posted 2004-10-25 09:32 AM


Marsha~
When the Ancient Spirits come ... I am happy for you that you make the time to listen~

Mesmerizing thoughts to ponder, poetess~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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choshi
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4 posted 2004-10-25 09:45 AM


haunting and strong writing, You are quite a sensitive listener. This verse evokes many feelings related to my ghosts:

let no
one distract me
as plenty before
i hear the waves
callin as they come to shore


Just Beautiful!

Thank you    ~P


MGROVES
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5 posted 2004-10-25 09:47 AM


thankyou marge, now i know i can listen, and see, knowing i am not crazy


Earth Angel
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6 posted 2004-10-25 10:30 AM


MG, you be one who sees and listens...

~ and writes very well of your dream visions.

Continue to be open to spirit visitations and their messages.

Beautifully written.

Love & Light,
EA

MGROVES
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7 posted 2004-10-25 11:27 AM


EA  thank you, been wanting to for long time, didnt want to think i was crazy. i have had visions all my life. time to make sense of them. thanks again your replies means alot to me


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8 posted 2004-10-25 01:12 PM


So happy to read you, dear Marge!

And this is an excellent write!

Sensitive souls are blessed ... in silent meditation comes truth.

Nothing crazy about this gift!


Love and hugs.
Margherita

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9 posted 2004-10-25 01:27 PM


There are few who can express what they hear when the spirits speak...
you have done this well.  Well done.

MGROVES
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10 posted 2004-10-25 01:37 PM


thank you all for the replies and support and encouragement


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