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Don_Juan
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since 2004-04-08
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Far from where I am going

0 posted 2004-12-15 11:35 PM



Shadow Shrouded
Thief of bodies
sneaking past living eyes
to a vessel unprotected
comandeering skin of the ignorant
all in vengence
to fulfill
forlorn earthly desires

chorus
Ethereal Criminal
Warn all that you can
for the one in my skin
the fire behind my eyes
is no form of me.

Sudden jerk
of all soul ties
falling to feet
of the unwatchful living
a tresspasser
taking an empty cadaver
for his own

bridge [sing in quarter note triplet build]
I should have followed
your pain trail
back into the darkness
am i to blame?
your action, reaction
all revenge
ruining my world
in the name of yours
Your time
passes too quickly
through my hourglass

chorus
ethereal criminal
warn all that you can
for the one in my skin
the fire behind my eyes
is no form of me

nice use of muffin

aim= FlyingScrew. message me if you feel.

© Copyright 2004 John Lervezuk - All Rights Reserved
Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178

1 posted 2004-12-16 04:18 PM


Excellent!

Eric

Don_Juan
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since 2004-04-08
Posts 252
Far from where I am going
2 posted 2004-12-16 06:16 PM


thanks for dropping in and commenting.

always appreciated
-John

nice use of muffin

aim= FlyingScrew. message me if you feel.

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