navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #34 » Running
Open Poetry #34
Post A Reply Post New Topic Running Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
poe
Member
since 2004-09-06
Posts 180
Heading to China

0 posted 2004-12-14 09:11 PM


Fallen to your knees
Eyes closed, a tear rolls down
However it is a tear of joy, causing the streak down your cheek
Your mind is causing a spectacle of fireworks
A light shines brightly, though those shutters called eyelids are still closed
Beyond this bright light is an image
This image is the cause of all these spectacles
The reason why your brain is racing,
Yet your mouth can not utter a word
Your legs finally respond to your thoughts
Slowly you begin to run
They finally are moving as fast as heart
The image is becoming visible
All of sudden you stop and realize
That this image is love
You have finally found it
And it is as beautiful as you could have ever imagined.

Tomorrow comes for those who fear it.
Today never ends for those who live it.

© Copyright 2004 Poe Wilson - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-12-15 07:38 AM


it is, I think, a love and understanding of all things...this Love you write of so descriptively...it is in fact most of the time patience, allowing it to come to you..and it has...found you....hugs
Midnitesun
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647
Gaia
2 posted 2004-12-15 10:01 PM


an enjoyable running experience is worth the wait

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
3 posted 2004-12-15 11:30 PM


Excellent write.
TD

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
4 posted 2004-12-16 04:06 AM



*Alli4000*
Deputy Moderator 10 Tours
Member Elite
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188
The World of Poetry
5 posted 2004-12-16 06:46 PM


Great write!!! Enjoyed~

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #34 » Running

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary