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Hannah
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0 posted 2004-10-23 09:50 PM



Snow, snow
Falling everywhere
My nose is cold
And my toes are froze
But when I go in
It is much better
I sit in front of the heater
In my nice, warm, cozy sweater

Hannah

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In Your Poetic Mind
1 posted 2004-10-23 09:59 PM


Hi Hannah--

what a vivid image of the cold and snow....

please check your email for a special greeting

we are excited you have joined our family...


Kindly

Lauren~

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look deep into each word
and you will understand the
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Susan
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walking the surreal
2 posted 2004-10-23 10:01 PM


Hey Hannah girl - sing from your heart baby-

Love you - Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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Gaia
3 posted 2004-10-23 10:09 PM


sounds like hot cocoa time, and a good poetry book to snuggle with on a warm lap.
Welcome to this adventureland of poetry!  

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The World of Poetry
4 posted 2004-10-23 10:12 PM


Boy that sweater sure sounds nice and cozy.  
Beautiful first post.  I hope you'll be posting alot more.  

Welcome to Passions!     

~Alli~


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littlewing
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5 posted 2004-10-23 10:13 PM


Hi, Hannah, sounds as if you have been to NY  *smile*

Welcome to PIP.

Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2004-10-24 10:51 AM


Hi Hannah, you have captured the snow season very well.  Welcome to our home of blue, I hope you enjoy your time here.

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
7 posted 2004-10-24 11:39 AM


Hello Hannah and welcome to Passions.
I know you will enjoy it here...
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

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8 posted 2004-10-24 12:13 PM


Hannah~



I want to welcome you to our circle of friends, young lady~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Hannah
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9 posted 2004-10-24 02:24 PM


thank you for all those beautiful responses- I appreciate it-

Happy Halloween

Hannah


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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
10 posted 2004-10-24 08:56 PM


lovely thoughts...

welcome to Passions !!

ice
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Pennsylvania
11 posted 2004-10-24 09:15 PM


Welcome Hannah....
As you can probably tell by my nic, I like winter, and also winter poems..
--------ice
  ><>

Come read to me some poem,
Some simple and heartfelt lay,
That shall soothe this restless feeling
And banish the thoughts of day.
Longfellow

froggy
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Michigan
12 posted 2004-10-24 11:53 PM


Nice read Hannah.
I live in a winter state,know these feelings you speak of all to well. :-)
I enjoyed this read.

Welcome to Pip

:-)

passing shadows
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displaced
13 posted 2004-10-25 04:35 AM


makes me almost want to move to somewhere that has snow

almost

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