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Ivy Rose
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0 posted 2004-10-23 08:14 PM



That you could speak
to these red-tango eyes
about love and the dance itself,
your soul absorbed with
Passion's clicking castanets.

Promenading past the hour
when the dance has simmered hot
picking up new tango rhythms.
Raptured beats have tapped out ardor
with the Fantasia of seduction.

Enticing tango lips,
swaying tango hips,
stoked to flame by a temptress
with exotic Latin movements.
Fiery Flamenco phrases executed
on the dance floor of heart and soul,
flashes of fire flaming
from the irises of these red-tango eyes.



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Gaia
1 posted 2004-10-23 10:20 PM


wow, what a cool write!
I've had a few of those red-tango-eyed nights.

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2004-10-24 12:32 PM


Nice...James
Dark Angel
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3 posted 2004-10-24 02:17 AM


from the irises of these red-tango eyes.

Lerve that last line

and I am haunted
by my illicit exquisite dream
but I can't really wake up
so I just drift in between

~ani difranco~

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