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Open Poetry #34
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~DreamChild~
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in your dreams

0 posted 2004-12-10 12:27 PM


soft spoken whispers,
across warm, wrinkled linen,
kiss me good morning.

© Copyright 2004 derrick gillum - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-12-10 12:45 PM


nice!
Charisma
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lost in blue pages
2 posted 2004-12-10 02:16 PM


ah this I like very much!!

Charisma

choshi
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New York
3 posted 2004-12-10 02:17 PM


really nice!!!
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2004-12-10 02:49 PM


Nice Senryu, DC.
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2004-12-10 02:54 PM


Much enjoyed your Senryu, DC.

     Season's Greetings!

miscellanea
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OH
6 posted 2004-12-10 03:42 PM


a pleasure to read!
        misc'e

*Alli4000*
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7 posted 2004-12-10 04:43 PM


Like this alot.

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

~DreamChild~
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in your dreams
8 posted 2004-12-10 11:21 PM


what is Senryu?
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