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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2004-12-10 07:51 AM


Humility

I never thought I’d write this song
But thought I would, just pass along
Like all this life of chaos end
Just thought I’d slide around the bend

Humility still lights a spark
It glows a glow within the dark
And thought it leaves the dust to lie
I would a word to say goodbye

To sigh desire, of each day
And send illusion on its way
Is not the chaos that I see?
And not the nature meant to be

And thought the stream has worn my rock
There is no action I would block
I would the river take my grime
And change the chaos one more time

For chaos is the God of change
And humility its soil of strange



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Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-12-10 08:29 AM


For chaos is the God of change
And humility its soil of strange

~*~

Long live change...
chaotic or otherwise.

Good morning, Sy...
tea, brie and...oui!


Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2004-12-10 08:33 AM


chuckling..it seems as though you read my mind in certain parts of this Sey.  I absolutely love this. Good morning sir.
scorpio
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3 posted 2004-12-10 08:40 AM


"Humility still lights a spark
It glows a glow within the dark.."

You light these pages up with your glow Sy.  

believe in what your heart feels...

passing shadows
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4 posted 2004-12-10 08:44 AM


yes ...chaos...

*pondering*

Enchantress
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5 posted 2004-12-10 08:51 AM


Wonderful morning write Sy.
Love to read your pearls of wisdom.
~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~

~ Let peace begin with me... ~

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2004-12-10 09:10 AM


Sunshine
Tea, brie and...oui!

Gentle,
Good morning sweet.

scorpio,
Thank you my friend.

passing,
Yes chaos rules the ways. LOL

Nancy,
I'll take both hugs and tea.

Martie
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7 posted 2004-12-10 01:53 PM


Sy

A curtsy to the master sir, in matters that rhyme the heart of part.  

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8 posted 2004-12-10 02:04 PM


its always a pleasure to read you!!

enjoyed your wise words very much

Ccharisma

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9 posted 2004-12-10 02:08 PM


The stream only smoothed your rock and was seemingly gentle and patient in doing so. Enjoyed
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10 posted 2004-12-10 02:53 PM


You exude humility, gentility and inner tranquility!

Change stirs up the status quo and makes life more interesting! ~ Not necessarily more fun, but definitely provides us with the opportunities to learn and grow!

Love & Light,
EA


Janet Marie
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11 posted 2004-12-10 06:36 PM


Humility still lights a spark
It glows a glow within the dark

==========================

and as you know, that humility has always been one of the things that I adore about you and your poetry.

yeppers..its a light...a heart-light

*ww*


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