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RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

0 posted 2004-12-09 07:03 PM

Our Father who art all the heavens
And all we dare deem is below

Hallowed indeed is thy name
We’re too small to ever know

Thy kingdom runs through the cycle
Of all life which is also a thread

Born from one seed by our Mother Earth
By your will till that’s done and she’s fed

Her Earth is a part of your heaven
A gift like the night and the day,

The seasons, all sustenance, reason
From which your disciples have strayed

For our trespasses to e’er be forgiven
Such a plea need be made to all

Of the creatures whose charge we’ve been given
And who, helpless, precede in our fall

And too those that suffer oppression
For the differences we won’t transcend

Tis our brothers who need our confessions
in a world which will end for

All Men

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-12-09 07:36 PM

Sir...

I will forego the PC,
and just say, I am
librarying this, and leaving
behind a most sincere

thank you.

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises...

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2004-12-09 09:13 PM

For our trespasses to e’er be forgiven
Such a plea need be made to all

Of the creatures whose charge we’ve been given
And who, helpless, precede in our fall

Amen to this.
Excellent write. Chris

Don't forget my presents!!

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

3 posted 2004-12-10 12:16 PM

Thank you both for commenting on the heretics write.

Political correctness is an oxymoron. A mere bit lip for silencing a slip of what may appear bigotted and just another shovel of dirt on the grave of the issues we should be discussing.

Seemingly every day new scientific confirmation of all living things' common root is surfacing. Yet higher grows the teetering tower of babel, a house increasingly divided and filled with the swelling din of disconcerted disconnect.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

4 posted 2004-12-10 04:38 AM

Boy did you nail this...

Tis our brothers who need our confessions
in a world which will end for

All Men

Good stuff!

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

5 posted 2004-12-10 06:05 AM

"Her Earth is a part of your heaven
A gift like the night and the day,"

This says it all!
A cherished gift it is, reading this poem, I know you know this...

Well done and said, RS

Namaste
___________ice
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[This message has been edited by ice (12-10-2004 08:58 AM).]

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-12-10 09:41 AM

excellent!

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