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whiskey
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0 posted 2004-12-09 01:25 AM


Ball balls hung on branches green
Lights that shine inbetween
Tinsel drapped around shapely cone
Angel sits high on her throne
Stars hung reflecting light
Snowmen scattered with delight
Golly santa too is there
Hung on tips his glee to share
Curled over leaves are candy canes
Icicles drop to look like rain
Bells dance in window pane
Gold and silver bows arranged
Presents stacked high and bright
Anticipate Saint nick tonight


"Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. "

[This message has been edited by whiskey (12-09-2004 10:30 PM).]

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DavePage
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1 posted 2004-12-09 05:02 AM


Very nice.   I like the sense of humour.

Dave

LeeJ
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2 posted 2004-12-09 07:35 AM


very well done, getting me in the mood and smells of Christmas...


Toerag
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3 posted 2004-12-09 08:04 AM


Very nice write gal.....Jack Daniels couldn't have written it better Ms Whiskey
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4 posted 2004-12-09 08:54 AM


wonderful and delightful!
Susan Caldwell
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5 posted 2004-12-09 09:05 AM


lol...that first line made me laugh..

Well done!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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6 posted 2004-12-09 06:00 PM


Very good write! Love this!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

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7 posted 2004-12-09 06:12 PM


Delightful read...most enjoyable.
Hugs~

~ Let peace begin with me... ~

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8 posted 2004-12-10 12:49 PM


tis the season
nakdthoughts
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9 posted 2004-12-11 06:03 AM


just decorated mine yesterday...so pleasant to sit here and see

Nice to read you...Hope the family is well

M

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10 posted 2004-12-12 04:52 PM


very nice read
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11 posted 2004-12-12 05:34 PM


a fun read to set the mood!  Enjoyed a bunch!

       miscellanea

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