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~DreamChild~
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in your dreams

0 posted 2004-12-08 06:31 PM


limited thoughts daudling,
lingering, echoing,
nothing.

intangible, retracing continually
well-worn tracks to and fro
in darkness.

withering, the malnourished fruit
in explicit unveiling
of searching light.

know me not,
know yourself.
know nothing.

~ the stuff dreams are made of ~
          

© Copyright 2004 derrick gillum - All Rights Reserved
Larry C
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1 posted 2004-12-08 06:38 PM


Turns out people leave an evidence trail. They are known by their deeds even if they choose not to be known.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

~DreamChild~
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in your dreams
2 posted 2004-12-08 07:27 PM


haha.
regular i-detective, aren't we.
haha.
mount your case.
haha.


Larry C
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3 posted 2004-12-08 07:58 PM


I did in another thread. DC it is an interesting write but offers much sadness.
Peace.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

serenity blaze
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4 posted 2004-12-08 10:43 PM


*chuckle*

Funny thing is, I was just thinking if "married and flirting" at Pip were a crime punishable by execution, there would be such a long line we'd all die a natural death as we waited.

And by the way, if we're on the way to guillotine? I believe I have seniority.

oooooooooops

sorry.

Musta lost me head.

~DreamChild~
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5 posted 2004-12-09 12:31 PM


well, larry, more pain than sadness.
an expression of indignation, maybe.

passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2004-12-11 12:51 PM


I understand
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