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I Stand
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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I Stand I stand before the evening breeze Within the odor of the trees Watch the clouds go drifting by Painting colors on my eye It flies my mind into a float Brings my senses to a dote Lifting me to states naïve One that most would not believe I stand as Adam of a day Watching Eden on display Counting blessings one by one Until the sun is gone and done And in the tender of the seem I make a wish upon the dream I wish that all could feel this breeze Within the odor of the trees To open up their Eden’s door And see the wonder and the awe. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
It flies my mind into a float Brings my senses to a dote Lifting me to states naïve One that most would not believe Yeah, most definately know that richness Big smiles and hugs...thank you for the ripeness of your voice and I grab your hand shaking it furiously in excitement of a new morning of song from Mr. Sy...... Good to see you! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I stand as Adam of a day Watching Eden on display ========================== *smiling at you for this.... "Adam of a day" I stand as a moth craving rhyme ... grateful for Sy keeping perfect time.  *winkiewinkie*     |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Now that is what I call a sweet good morning. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Did I say I was standing as Randy. LOL Miss you Tink |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Well now...standing as Randy? That means Eve better get to baking some apple pies  LOLMeet me in Eden at 3 for raspberry tea. love ya me sweet Sy-guy. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
LOL@JM Wonderful uplifting morning read Sy! Have a great day. ~Moring hugs, Nancy~ ~ Let peace begin with me... ~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And in the tender of the seem I make a wish upon the dream I wish that all could feel this breeze Within the odor of the trees To open up their Eden’s door And see the wonder and the awe. ~*~ Everytime I open a Seymour Tabin poem... This is exactly the gift I receive... Thank you so much, Sy...  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You make me want to stand just there with you, in awe. Masterful poem! And an absolute KEEPER  ! Love and hugs, Margherita |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I stand as Adam of a day Watching Eden on display Counting blessings one by one Until the sun is gone and done Wonderful, wonderful Seymour !! hugs, Chris |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, It's a date. Nancy, Thank you sweet. Sunshine You are a love. Margherita Thank you dear you can come any time. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, Love you and have a happy holiday. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
From where "I Stand", you are able to bring Eden to your readers' doors through your wonderfully descriptive writing of it!  Care for an apple?  ~ Oh, perhaps you shouldn't. Remember what happened when I gave one to Adam! We wouldn't want history repeating itself! lol EA |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
This is a magnum opus. Great closing. JL |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How very lovely... I like this very much! *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Thank you love. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Good morning Sy .... a delight, sheer delight. I sit here looking at mountains covered with snow and they are glistening as the sun hits them. I'm in total awe!!!! hugs and smiles, Marti A single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JL Thank you so much. Earth Angel, I think you are right about the apple. :iss: |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a lovely write I almost missed...glad I didn't |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
"I stand as Adam of a day Watching Eden on display Counting blessings one by one Until the sun is gone and done" Ah, Sy you do have a way of poetically balancing things....... incredibly enjoyable. Eric IF YOU HAVE TO JUDGE SOMEONE DO IT ON THE SIDE OF MERCY AND LET TIME SEASON THE RESULTS. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marti, Always a joy to read your comment. passing Thank you sweet, I'm glad you liked. ethome And you make me incredibly happy with your enjoyment. |
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