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Revelations Of Reveal |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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What is wrought this wearied and worn hand from darkness yon the breech? A place born of a plan, to thee it must beseech. A gift perhaps of welling tides, of foam afore the seas, of places where our fear resides... In wait of what we see. A moment of welling truth, of telling words that fall on tenderness...a whispered thought to quell and sooth, to love and we to bless. A page upon a sandy shore, where vaunted wisdom lies in wait....In search of thoughts we must explore, to see and then relate. For from the sun of shimmer cast comes a warmth to bask and feel, unfurled upon a glimmer seen....and to one’s heart is sealed. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A gift perhaps of welling tides, of foam afore the seas, of places where our fear resides... In wait of what we see. A moment of welling truth, of telling words that fall on tenderness...a whispered thought to quell and sooth, to love and we to bless. A page upon a sandy shore, where vaunted wisdom lies in wait....In search of thoughts we must explore, to see and then relate. For from the sun of shimmer cast comes a warmth to bask and feel, unfurled upon a glimmer seen....and to one’s heart is sealed. ================================= ahh Barry, Barry...this is lovely.... what a pleasure this was to read aloud... loved the imagery and theme... clever form and presentation too.. ya know the moth loves ellips.  very very well done poet sir. Ink runs from the corners of my mouth. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Barry, What ever JM said isn't she something. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes Sy, our moth is quite a lady...when she speaks...we all listen, don't we? Thank you JM for your wonderful thoughts, do so gladly receive them. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 what an ending line |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thank yu Dixie dear...always a pleasure to read or see your thoughts. |
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