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Crossing Miles
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Crossing Miles |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Crossing Miles ~*~ Primary she comes to me two-dimensionally, in visual delight, accenting reds by yellows in golds, a blue twinkle of sparkling delight blinking at me hello the gift of her is held lightly this is me this is where I live this is me, thinking of you, my friend she is kindred to a heart’s beat in primary colors ~ I know we would meld in minds’ eye, for I am her background ~*~ Secondary The leaves still skip, for there has been no rain and the tease of snow that did not fall won’t chain back the melody of a leaf in laughter… the weather goes to the north and the south of us, leaving the legendary hole of our native Indian area visibly saying this is how it is… as the saga of invisible holes lives on… we are bared and naked of leaves and translucent of color… all is beige day gray and some of us are too soon begging for an early spring… winter solstice, just hours away gave me last night’s moon which left me wanting early early hours begged me come, come, look… fullest moon loomed o’erhead casting cottonwood shadows of come hither and follow the sprite, my eyes tracing the lines of where would we go thoughts, and the leaves rustled in the legends of old… ~*~ Primary Secondary is the background, then, for primary color as she would bring them, eternal youth in smile, brilliantine in touch, sensual, perhaps, in twist of word to make it stand against the backdrop of all that is, all that was. Sometimes I believe she feels we were parted at birth, because we sometimes touch each other so… through our poetry. She is primary, which is good, as I would not understand, otherwise, for a flower girl needs to know her colors. Just as a background of secondary, all in neutral, is needed, to set them off. ~*~ A repost for our flower girl, just 'cause. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
You make me glad I got up at half-past-three....for once insomnia or whatever this is, paid off. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
absolute Renoir you've painted here.... If I'd have known, I'd have gotten up earlier just to read this...Karilea, this is absolute and as your name...sunshine |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This brings such a warm smile Kari, tis beautiful. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Eloquent.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine You have sent a sliver of sun light to light the path of happy and I am happy.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful beautiful write Karilea.. I'm sure Martie will appreciate it just as much as I did. Hugs~ ~ Let peace begin with me... ~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Smiling and nodding in agreement with my sister's comments. Lovely Karilea. hugs, Chrislane |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
a leather chair perhaps and a chai tea can see a lady hemingway sans the stogie enjoyed this |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea/sissie Thank you for reposting this beautiful poem...sometimes it's just hard to have the right words to say.   |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
I like the feel of these words, soft but not mushy, Almost spiritual... a friendships reality.. Through wires, a dove coos Her fondness of another, That knowing has born. * Winter takes over Kansas, But it cannot stop her song. Enjoyed this lovely piece __________ice/ford ><> |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Such craftsmanship and thought show in each line. Well done. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...what an awesome write! Eric |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Excellent! Beyond words. Enjoyed the read. JL |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you have a heart of many colors mama K |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
God, that's beautiful! Eric IF YOU HAVE TO JUDGE SOMEONE DO IT ON THE SIDE OF MERCY AND LET TIME SEASON THE RESULTS. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Amazing write!!  ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
I am so glad you were feeling "just 'cause" so that I could partake of such a delight...I love it... |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I'll freely admit I just scanned images that entered my head as I read. It was like the first look at a painting and to need to come back over the years and see another depth of image, and another. It is almost like you print it out, hang it on the wall and read it over the years. Dave |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
I was attracked by the title... and even more pleasantly surprised by the poem... simply beautiful!!! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your talent brilliantly displayed! Very beautiful, dear Karilea. Love, Margherita |
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