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Open Poetry #34

the words

pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

0 posted 2004-10-23 02:52 AM

i lead them.
those never
managed to be
fled.
left
into
the non-rhetorical…
and comfort,
they adore
the comfort
servant,
to their
bareness.
naked meanings,
my touch
they kiss
spliced
within their own
caress.
trance-
formed.
they are mine
to ignore
rhyming history.

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

1 posted 2004-10-23 03:11 AM

I hate it when poeple think they can control me............. not protaining to you, but its like two o clock and I am very opiniated

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

2 posted 2004-10-23 04:23 AM

as always you provke though and contemplation, fine work

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-10-23 09:24 AM

and you can do wonders with those words
to knock me off my feet

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-10-24 07:01 AM

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

5 posted 2004-10-24 04:50 PM

Fabulous Pandanov, enjoyed your "words"

and I am haunted
by my illicit exquisite dream
but I can't really wake up
so I just drift in between

~ani difranco~

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

6 posted 2004-10-24 07:43 PM

wow.

I do not read you often enough.

And I intend to correct that.

I enjoyed this much, a slow drip of thought that runs profound.

very nice

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 2004-10-28 12:27 PM

I seek them... and am never sorry I did. *S*

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2004-12-04 05:31 AM

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

9 posted 2004-12-04 02:17 PM

Very nice write...

~Alli~

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