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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 my words.... if you read them would you know they were meant for you? Would they fall upon your soul like a lovers caress when you’ve been lonely too long could they convey the texture of my love? And could you interpret the devotion in every anguished syllable? Can you hear my sighs and know it was you when named only by ache need desire if you read my words, would you know? The passion I speak of that rips though my being is the sound of your voice desperate desires in jagged sobs of why is your eyes when I dream and the endless ocean that drowns me into depths beyond poetic expression is the want of your touch If you read me would you know? They were meant for you.... ~SEA~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Good grief, now that was like a soft gentle caress lady. How beautiful! Of course they were not for me, but I bet whomever they were meant for now has a warm tingle in their heart. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Wow - what a passionate cry of the heart - I hope the intended will know -  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Honey...the growth of you is amazing... I am so proud of you! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
If you read me would you know? They were meant for you.... How could one not! beautiful SEA. Maree  into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sea, he is blessed by this, and if he wouldn't know, you should press it to his eyes and let him feel the passion of your romantica |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Susan...perfectly lovely. Hugs~Nancy ~ Let peace begin with me... ~ |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"and the endless ocean that drowns me into depths beyond poetic expression is the want of your touch" Yes I think they would have to know.. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Sigh, I fealt that one to many times lol. Good read. Nice flow. Juju |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful! Eric |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
Beautiful! Great poem. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Susan, It's rhetorical, right? 'Cause I sure would. Wonderful, romantic write. You do it so well! Bunny hugs...  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Would they fall upon your soul like a lovers caress when you’ve been lonely too long could they convey the texture of my love? And could you interpret the devotion in every anguished syllable? Can you hear my sighs and know it was you when named only by ache need desire ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "SEA" Susan Ever Aching  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
so beautiful! |
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