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ecrivan
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0 posted 2004-11-30 12:23 PM



optimism at barrel bottom
bored with tedious procedure
far from excited news
an incomplete search of past art work
yields inconsistant canvas sizes
much of the work is not recorded
frame sizes are unmarked
a dig into the past
dry well of resources
tests organizational talents
to ask or not to ask for funds
one should be so thrilled
history repeats itself
but one goes through the motions
one never knows
to be more positive at this find
perhaps the next will come easier..
or harder if I see government
hands on faucet taps
and the flow of funds
slows to a drip...
now if one wants more postive results
at least there has to be more effort
in keeping the record right...



© Copyright 2004 Martin Dansky - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-11-30 05:27 AM


yes, true...history does repeat itself

I always love reading you

LeeJ
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2 posted 2004-11-30 06:42 AM


oh boy, was this so so true.  I believe, abstain might be an apt description?  You have certainly painted a master piece.  
Enjoyed!  Nice penning!

froggy
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since 2003-06-23
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3 posted 2004-11-30 10:43 PM


Hey Martin,
  I must agree with both Passing Shadows
and LeeJ on this one.

:-)


Ps. its snowing/raining here tonight.

Within this heart you'll find love

ecrivan
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4 posted 2004-12-01 02:04 AM


one can take application in 2 ways...I cold have taken it as an abstract noun...that snowy weather is coming here soon...


froggy
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5 posted 2004-12-01 09:02 PM


Hi Martin,
  Just thought I'd stop in to read this again.
  We got 6 1/2 inches of snow overnight.

If you want the snow I'll be more then gladly to send it to you. :-)

Love reading your words.

Within this heart you'll find love

ecrivan
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6 posted 2004-12-01 09:11 PM


We already did , thanks for the offer anyway I hate toting my shoes to work!


miscellanea
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7 posted 2004-12-01 09:15 PM


well brushed phrases!

     misc'e

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