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Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

0 posted 2004-11-29 04:34 PM

silver sip shimmer
drown within glimmer
gilding gold cast words
gifted as priceless treasure
to my soul needs

gem stone sparkle
radiating color hued spectrum
of passion play pleasure
ransom paid thrice
and then again

your chalice flows love words
sensual cascade stream
awash in vintage fine
seduction taste measure
quenching my heart thirst

you honor me

s.a.t.

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

1 posted 2004-11-29 04:38 PM

How beautiful. *S*

Honor is such a special part of love... so necessary to lasting. *S*

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-11-29 04:40 PM

Very beautiful..love the alliterations in this lovely piece.
Hugs~Nancy

~ Let peace begin with me... ~

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2004-11-29 05:59 PM

wear the weave left there
as your warm
lady skin bare
with suggestions

under the dream
do you dare
dance a lover
and know his eyes

as your mirror questions

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2004-11-29 06:49 PM

Um-hmmmm

I think you just honored

US!

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

5 posted 2004-11-29 06:52 PM

Yes, I think you did!
miscellanea

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

6 posted 2004-11-29 10:16 PM

thank you, my friends - very much - you honor me in your replies -

Hugs - Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

7 posted 2004-11-29 11:56 PM

“gold cast words
gifted as priceless treasure
to my soul needs”

Susan:
A soul hearten by compassionate words
is a gifted soul with a spirit of benevolence,
and is honored by that very endeavor.

Beautiful poetry.

JL

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

8 posted 2004-11-30 10:22 AM

Wonderful use of alliteration! Well done Susan.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

9 posted 2004-11-30 10:25 AM

JL - your words warm me - thank you

Donna - am glad you enjoyed - thank you

Hugs to you both - Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

10 posted 2004-11-30 10:28 AM

your chalice flows love words
sensual cascade stream
awash in vintage fine
seduction taste measure
quenching my heart thirst

lovely writing..from the heart

hugs
M

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

11 posted 2004-11-30 11:22 AM

a great story of warm envelopes those who read this....tremendous write

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

12 posted 2004-11-30 06:24 PM

Great job Susan...beautiful.

~Alli~

*:.AIM = Alli4000.:*
Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

13 posted 2004-11-30 07:59 PM

thank you for your word gifts - my friends. Most kind.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

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