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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
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Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2004-11-28 08:37 AM



Lovers Until Daybreak

Colour the pathways
Dreams are waiting
Thoughts take to sky
Among stars creating

Mind sails the ocean
I charted with love
Enchanting the night
Beneath stars above

A ship landed ashore
As palm trees sway
Stars were twinkling
Upon the moonlit bay

Barefoot on the sand
In dreams we reach
Desires slowly unfold
On a secluded beach

Dreamers rendezvous
We bask in the glow
Lovers until daybreak
Where pleasures flow

HopeĀ©2004

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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2004-11-28 08:42 AM


You are so lucky Hope, to have the shore  as inspiration...

hugs

M

* I meant to ask you how your visit went with your family members you hadn't seen in awhile...

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
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Perth Western Australia
2 posted 2004-11-28 09:01 AM


Thank you Maureen , yes the ocean is always there to inspire the thoughts I desire

Hope
P.S My visit went great , reunion with friends and family after 35 years , although sad to say my fathers health is worsening , so I will treasure and cherish what we shared those few weeks together

Hope

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
3 posted 2004-11-28 11:43 AM


Dear Hope, you have been beautifully inspired. A really charming write!
Wonderful scenes you painted too.
Love and hugs.
Margherita

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

4 posted 2004-11-28 04:08 PM


Hope

You have magic in your words.


Dave

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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5 posted 2004-11-28 05:11 PM


o so beautifully written on this lovely topic
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2004-11-29 11:40 PM


Enjoyed...James
JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
7 posted 2004-11-29 11:45 PM


"Dreamers rendezvous
We bask in the glow
Lovers until daybreak
Where pleasures flow"

Passionate indeed.  Beauty!
Enjoyed.

JL



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