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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2004-11-27 12:28 PM



When I'm upset, feeling sorry for myself,
not to mention feeling the pain
of those trudging through sand storms and mud,
dodging missiles and bullets...

I listen to some upbeat guitar music,
some Strange Beautiful Music
captured within exotic lively escapades
played by master Joe Satriani,
or to Jimi, Eric C, Kitaro,
or any others who can move me

and I light some incense,
eat a pizza washed down with a beer,
shake and rock my booties all over
this apartment floor,
with feet in stomping beat
(sorry, dear neighbors)

while I try to remember why

I used to build fantasy sand castles
at the Rincon, or next to Santa Monica Pier
listening to the crashing waves
and screaming gulls
while watching tanned slim surfer boys
with sun-bleached hair cresting the waves,
hanging ten in the warm sun,
flirting with all of us young maidens
in our too-tiny-bikinis.

And suddenly I remember
LIFE.

It is still out there.

© Copyright 2004 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
Don_Juan
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Far from where I am going
1 posted 2004-11-27 12:54 PM


I enjoyed the message of the poem. I also loved the imagery of the sand on the beach and surfers catching a few waves. It seemed like i was standing there with you as Eric Clapton and Jimi Hendrix played a duet with their searing gutiars.
Great write.

-John

nice use of muffin

icebox
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2 posted 2004-11-27 12:56 PM


*smile*

There is something about a guitar.

Martie
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3 posted 2004-11-27 01:03 PM


Kacy

While teaching young children I learned, that "music hath charms to sooth the savage beast".  

Midnitesun
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4 posted 2004-11-27 01:55 PM


Don Juan, thanks for that, it is a good memory, isn't it?
icebox, lol, yes, the guitars do play me.
Martie, yes, the savage beast in me. lol

Ericc
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5 posted 2004-11-27 07:16 PM


It always is.
Thanks for the beautiful reminder!

Eric

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6 posted 2004-11-27 08:06 PM


used to build fantasy sand castles
at the Rincon, or next to Santa Monica Pier
listening to the crashing waves
and screaming gulls
while watching tanned slim surfer boys
with sun-bleached hair cresting the waves,
hanging ten in the warm sun,
flirting with all of us young maidens
in our too-tiny-bikinis.

And suddenly I remember
LIFE.


Oh yeah! I remember too!

Fabulous Kacy

Mxx

into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread.
~Sarah McLachlan~

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