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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-11-27 08:09 AM

we were tree
with fragile skin
back to back
with one breath
and heart

I worshiped your roots
your limbs
the places you made water
from the rain
you gave your charms to

you smiled at my flexing
bending and tying myself
into knots of cold showers
clinging to rock hard
with my best grip

to impress your eyes
with how I could change
the wind into little breezes
and guide it there
to your damp leaves

you drew pictures
on the willing earth
and wrote poems
in the sand under your shadows
you asked if the sun bothered me

always looking at you that way

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Dark

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-11-27 08:28 AM

to impress your eyes
with how I could change
the wind into little breezes

~*~

You wrote a song in this one...

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2004-11-27 08:39 AM

the trees crossed
into your black sky
awake in the morning
pregnant with apples

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2004-11-27 11:09 AM

Dark~
There is beauty in your word-branches~

'you drew pictures
on the willing earth
and wrote poems
in the sand under your shadows
you asked if the sun bothered me

always looking at you that way'

I sit in *sigh* of your remarkable thoughts~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2004-11-27 11:58 AM

DS

This is so lovely!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2004-11-27 12:13 PM

What halo gifts your rendering DS.
Enjoyed.
TD

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

6 posted 2004-11-27 12:18 PM

This brings me smiles and warmth - D - its branches reach for me and pull me in -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

7 posted 2004-11-27 01:57 PM

Dark, Amazing write!

~Alli~

*:.AIM = Alli4000.:*
Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

8 posted 2004-11-28 07:49 AM

D~

This is my favorite of yours!!! I love this! and I am keeping it and you can't stop me.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

9 posted 2004-11-28 03:50 PM

to impress your eyes
with how I could change
the wind into little breezes
and guide it there
to your damp leaves

Fantabulous writing Mr D

Where you bin?

Mxx

into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread.
~Sarah McLachlan~

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