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Don_Juan
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0 posted 2004-11-24 08:07 PM


First Snow

Shards of frozen
water fall
from heavenly resevoirs
to an unprepared november
lifeless tree limbs
hang in low
ivory arches
giving way
as a gate
to a white
sun dampened road
eyes widen
whilst looking through
a warm window
as a devious smile
fades into the air
clothes tussel
wrapping, embracing bare skin
as a wooden blockade
parts with the wall
as a brass knob turns
feet quicken upon
fragile powder
boots meet air
while body meets
a sea of white
satisfaction
of a dent
in first snow

(ah lovely snow the day before thanksgiving in Michigan, it can't get any better. I hope you all enjoy this as much as i'm enjoying the view outdoors)

nice use of muffin

© Copyright 2004 John Lervezuk - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2004-11-24 08:58 PM


A toast to the white! Happy Thanksgiving.
TD

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Canada eh.
2 posted 2004-11-24 09:01 PM


Should be great for the parade in Detroit tomorrow eh?
Looks the same on this side of the river too.
Hugs~

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passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-11-25 01:16 AM


what a scene!
Sunshine
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4 posted 2004-11-25 08:57 AM


I most certainly enjoyed our brief 2.5 inches...

I'm ready for more!

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5 posted 2004-11-25 01:16 PM


BEAUTIFUL!
Happy Thanksgiving!

~Alli~

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Don_Juan
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6 posted 2004-11-25 02:59 PM


thank you all for dropping in to my snowy scene. Happy Thanksgiving
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