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I lit a Light
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I lit a Light |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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I lit a Light I sit within a flower’s rise With wit I smell the lovely prize And touch the petals one by one To drink the body of its sun I feel the essence of its prime Giving off the smell of time Aroma of a fragrance bowl Osmosis of an awesome goal The aim to me is symmetry A balance of equality Adjustment to the tune of fife Adjustment to its song of life To sense it in its full believe Is almost past a minds conceive The infinite of changing prime Forever of the sense of time A gathering, transcending trend The omni of forever’s wend |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I sit within a flower’s rise With wit I smell the lovely prize And touch the petals one by one To drink the body of its sun I feel the essence of its prime Giving off the smell of time Aroma of a fragrance bowl Osmosis of an awesome goal ========================== Sy, Sy, Sy... each morn you poetically paint a smile on the sky.  When you rhyme with Omni and Osmosis ... youre the poet-man with the mostess  *ww*    |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Got two appointments early this morning. Have to leave in a few minutes. But just had to say. Winkiewinkie and before I go. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sey, now this sir rocks and made me smile and...Im keepin it.  The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful wonderful morning read Sy! You make the sun shine even when I can't see it for the rain. ~Morning Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Five some years ago I never knew I would be so fortunate in picking out a little name that forever suited so many poems... I sit within a flower’s rise With wit I smell the lovely prize And touch the petals one by one To drink the body of its sun You're a  , you know that? |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
hallmark & lyrical.... what a lovely spill of words... **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
To sense it in its full believe Is almost past a minds conceive The infinite of changing prime Forever of the sense of time A gathering, transcending trend The omni of forever’s wend Supurb writing and rhyme...hugs and Happy Thanksgiving Day |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
My electricity is off... has been for hours... I came over to the library to peek at poems... so you have to know how I grinned when I saw your title.... and wished you would visit! *G* But my amusement gave way to appreciation... this is beautiful, my friend... Happy Thanksgiving! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle, You welcome, thank you and have a happy holiday. Nancy, Happy holiday sweet. Sunshine, You are a love Happy Holiday.babygirL, Sweet reply, have a happy. LeeJ Happy Thanksgiving to you. And thank you. suthern No candles? That would make for a lovely Thanksgiving. Thank you sweet. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
better late than never...loved this Sy |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Randy made me do it. LOL |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, Better late than never. JM, Too |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Mater Sy, this is superb! An early treat for Thanksgiving. Hope you have a happy one. ......jo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
iliana Thank you and may I wish you the same. |
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