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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2004-11-23 07:27 AM


Dancing Shadows

Silver lights the leaves and trees
Dancing in the midnight breeze
Shadows come alive in awe
Nuance plays upon the store

Phantoms rise from senses hive
Spirits those were once alive
Feeding on the nectars spell
Waking up the past of dwell

And I am captive of the seem
Dancing in a field of dream
Holding to a maidens flight
On midnight silver of the night

Enfolded in a tears embrace
I hold this trace of silver lace
A treasure vaulted in my mind
The pleasure of a sleeping find

Exquisite of a soul’s insights
Solicited on moonlit nights

© Copyright 2004 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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1 posted 2004-11-23 07:30 AM


Like warriors riding white steeds across the face of the moon

You go Sir Knight!

Wonderful story...hello and Good Morning


~eternal child~
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2 posted 2004-11-23 07:31 AM


eerie in a nice way

enjoyed reading you

~ec~

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2004-11-23 07:31 AM



Oh wow, Sy...
thank you so much
for weaving yet
another
for my treasure chest!








Goldenrose
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4 posted 2004-11-23 07:46 AM


Well written poem here Sey.

thank you..

Goldenrose.

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5 posted 2004-11-23 10:38 AM


How very lovely. *S* I like this very much! *S*
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2004-11-23 12:28 PM


I'm late today Sy!
But, better late than never right?
Excellent afternoon read.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me ~

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7 posted 2004-11-23 01:50 PM


Seymour~

'Enfolded in a tears embrace
I hold this trace of silver lace'


You give me reason once again ... to *sigh*~

Happy Thanksgiving to you and yours~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Ericc
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8 posted 2004-11-23 02:07 PM


Wow...a perfect flow of words.
Great write!

Eric

Gentle Spirit
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9 posted 2004-11-23 02:23 PM


  Well done sweetie.
Dark Angel
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10 posted 2004-11-23 02:27 PM


Ahhh Seymour it is always a pleasure to read you.



Maree

into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread.
~Sarah McLachlan~

scorpio
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right...there
11 posted 2004-11-23 02:42 PM


Wonderful images in this beautiful write Sy.  Moonlit creates very unique images indeed.

believe in what your heart feels...

passing shadows
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12 posted 2004-11-23 08:02 PM


oooooooo! love this!
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