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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-11-22 01:22 PM


Feel


Feel your heart within my head
Feel your love in my bed
Feel women in my life
Feel the spirit as we move
Feel the strife of words chewed
Feel the world out of balance
Feel it revolve like a chalice
Feel it’s spirit go for gold
Feel it's love never sold
Feel it's sound like a hound
Feel it’s words
Feel it bound

As a dream upon a shore
Asking little
Receiving more
As a sound
Across a sea
Voices drifting
Home to thee

On an old and tired shore
Just an image
Nothing more
Feels the tide and salt come in
And smiles

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LeeJ
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1 posted 2004-11-22 01:25 PM


Well done David, enjoyed
DavePage
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2 posted 2004-11-22 01:43 PM


Thanks Lee

Dave

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