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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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a morning day with tin handles and unlocked locks just a sunday high away from sink heart broken or door bell giddy up you spoke of vulnariblity I guess like virginity one would cry at the loss of modest prevention with warm veils I made a tree out of dimes and splintered it at the phone by the candy store you owned talking to you in your sleep with my hands over your ears lest I wake the lady with flannel feet and I hate my velcro fur when we embrace and you have to pull away for a date with your other hero _____________ Dark |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
and I hate my velcro fur when we embrace and you have to pull away ...only you can come up with these images~~ ~smiling~ M |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What Maureen said...  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hey Stranger loved this...especially: "from sink heart broken or door bell giddy up" I have those things, but never would have thought to name them.  |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Very interesting read...enjoyed!  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
In my sleep laden reads this morning, I missed this one - interesting imagery here - sorry about the velcro fur - ouch. And the lady with the flannel feet - hehe - we'll let her sleep  Hugs you -  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes, what imagery! |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
::enjoying your depths:: **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
just a sunday high away from sink heart broken or door bell giddy up whewww, tremendous |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dark~ 'door bell giddy up' You word-amaze me~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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