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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2004-10-22 07:31 AM


The Wind of Chance

The wind of chance did nuance
A séance of a moving dance
With clusters of the puffs of breeze
It moved illusion in a tease

Branches wiggled the leaves squiggled
My mind turned a dizzy giggle
And when I looked away to rest
The winds of chance did beat my chest

I could not hide the dance of day
It poked me in its dance of play
Teased me with its touch of lure
Made me look the leaves once more

I do believe they sang a song
And I began to hum along
Its then it woke the dolt in me
That freedom was an open sea

So now I dance the wind of chance
In all and every circumstance

© Copyright 2004 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-10-22 07:35 AM


What a jig!
Ah Sy...this puts just the
right tempo into our Friday!

huge

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2004-10-22 08:08 AM


A wonderful way to start our Friday Sy.  Good morning hon.  

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Toerag
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Ala bam a
3 posted 2004-10-22 08:33 AM


Sy, yanno?..I saw Gentle Spirit, Sunshine, Suthern, Nancy Lee, and a few other gals, all in short flowing skirts...and this is just what I was thinking...well, almost...I was kinda thinking..."A chance of wind"....
icebox
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4 posted 2004-10-22 08:37 AM


"Its then it woke the dolt in me
That freedom was an open sea"

This is great!  You made me laugh.  Thank you.

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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5 posted 2004-10-22 08:38 AM


beautiful sway sir Sy....once again you have made my mind forfiet to the sway of easy reading...what hypnotic glaze you emit...
Enjoyed

Enchantress
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6 posted 2004-10-22 09:15 AM


Hi Sy!  Love the lyrical flow of this beauty!
Sort of made me want to dance my way into the kitchen
to pour you a cup of Chai tea.
~Morning hugs and thanks for the great read, Nancy~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2004-10-22 09:41 AM


Ooo! I loved it! I feel like whirling and twirling and swirling about in the winds of chance! This feels like a lucky day for both of us! Wheee! Life is a merry-go-round!

Around and around and around we go!
And where we land ~ nobody knows!
But on and on and on we dance
On the winds of whim and capricious chance.

Goooood morning, Sir T !

Dance on! ~ Write On!

Hugs with love,
EA

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (10-22-2004 11:34 AM).]

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2004-10-22 03:39 PM


Sunshine
Glad you enjoyed.

Gentle,
Good morning sweet.

Toe,
I get your windy drift.

icebox
Always happy to give a laugh.

LeeJ,
Delightful comment, thank you.

Nancy,
Glad you enjoyed, have a good one.

Earth Angel
A capricious tumble weed Thats me.

Janet Marie
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9 posted 2004-10-23 01:38 PM


The wind of chance did nuance
A séance of a moving dance
With clusters of the puffs of breeze
It moved illusion in a tease

Branches wiggled the leaves squiggled
My mind turned a dizzy giggle
And when I looked away to rest
The winds of chance did beat my chest

I could not hide the dance of day
It poked me in its dance of play
Teased me with its touch of lure
Made me look the leaves once more

======================================

Sy-babers...I had to come back and get this one...its melodics were just too cool to miss...
you are our rock and roll poet of rhyme
and me winkielove too.


~~~

I would love to live as a river flows, carried by the surprise of its own unfolding.

~Fluent~
John O'Donohue


passing shadows
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displaced
10 posted 2004-10-23 02:09 PM



Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2004-10-23 02:23 PM


JM,
Save those pictures, store them for that poem. Miss you more than I can say.


Passing,
Thank you sweet.

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