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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2004-11-19 08:15 AM


after the satin slips to sighs
and the music is warm love liquor
when your eyes are doe eyes
and sin has melted to pools
on fevered skin

then you dance your woman
you are willow on wind
with sky mind you feather
your steps, gownless
you are summer and winter

you are tall mist shimmering
in the arms of your day dream
you are a bowl of rainbows
with your colors of love
and at the edge of your smile

the gold is a heartshape diamond
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Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-11-19 08:22 AM



And you are beautiful to see thus...
your treasures cannot be held by any chest...
keep looking at women your way...

because the rest of us continue to hope that
others will follow suit.

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2004-11-19 08:24 AM


ms sun..yes one must look at them
as gifts ...thanks to you ms

Cpat Hair
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3 posted 2004-11-19 09:47 AM


gifts indeed...

  well done sir... always enjoy the journey..

Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2004-11-19 10:30 AM


oh now sir this is just so very very lovely and brings a smile to my lil heart...

this m'friend is worth it's weight in diamonds.  

Susan
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5 posted 2004-11-19 11:03 AM


Sigh - you write lovely so well and wrap it as a gift of the simple pleasure of being lost in your words - I like to linger in the sensation -

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Enchantress
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6 posted 2004-11-19 11:09 AM


I love the feeling this left me with D.
Warm, wanted and cherished.
Hugs~

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2004-11-19 11:10 AM


cpat, thanks amigo for the review..

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ms GS, slow hugs lady friend, you smile me with your warm


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ms susan, my satin shimmer, lean close to the sigh fire, let it brand your moments
with the slow love man's answer.


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me E lady..thank you little one, for stepping close
and touching with your eye hands..a kiss to your wrist..

Martie
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8 posted 2004-11-19 11:30 AM


DS

Lovely words to wrap around me on this cold autumn morning.  

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2004-11-19 11:34 AM


ms martie, come snuggle my neighbor lady friend...slow hugs to you and thanks to you
Earth Angel
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10 posted 2004-11-19 02:33 PM



I love this side of your creativity. Absolutely stunning and magical.

Love & Rainbow Lights,
EA

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11 posted 2004-11-20 02:30 PM


yes, magical indeed
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