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Because of You
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Because of You |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Densely written Complex hither articulates A familiar ghost Systematic imaginative faculty Illuminating discovery My cohort perspective Perspires Unbroken accordance Decoys full cedar perpetual What shall collapse purest love? Nothing! The farther you are, the larger Your silhouette becomes Me…. While spaced out floats Well-argue reformulation Feeling the nightingales, sing tender green Moist light, mingling with song Soul’s will receives my hand Full of life, wondrous writings Proclaim light edge wear Creasing softly along the spine Marking my forehead, with your spirit flutters Elevating dreamlike thinking Like a turnstile of the mind Crossing the lines Memoirs of a hopeless drunk A magic 8 ball valentine Traveling obscure, into revealing Sovereign elements so mysterious Militant consciousness, three dimensional Makes a wish You crystallize around the folds of my skin Your delicate voice Wickedly confusing me Who doesn’t want to be loved? Oh God I close my eyes And feel your breath around my smile Honeysuckle and surf smell deeds Written by sentinels of watch fires Great voices form sun robes Around full nesting song birds Where four winds, carry windowpanes Branding my heart kindly By a glide in silence Where its daytime and Phosphorescent bloom Keeping balance of what are now, missing tears Far from me, a mirage made of flesh Passes through my nakedness Reaching reality and dream You… Unaware of me…and passionate desires Where sea whispers star shaped flames My mind forms your shape, a hundred times Touching softly your countenance, your mouth shadow Sorcerer in my arms you reach the depth of my dream Pink wool unwinding lungs Screaming you, you, you…… Fell into secret fire, only you and I know Heavy breasts of divine Without reason, whispering an opaque earth Grassland velvet, passing over our bodies Polite Rushing headlong Unto a land of imaginings We touch the breakwater of splendid nature I love the loneliness and cruelty of you! Clinging to my mouth Convulsing Trembling Reaching Tempting Naming every desire You are the flower Where I speak to you silently Your nails dig into me like a promise Of despair scrathing distance between Do you ever see the same night sky? The same stars? Same planes, it is then I wonder.... With heart of oak Do you feel the shiny leaves of life? Do you wear ocean slippers of depth? Do you hear flesh quiver, sweat? I loved you I loved you I loved you Did you listen? You never believed! You'll never know.... It's not your fault... I will live better now Believing that kind of love lives I listened, felt, experienced The divine rose We were meant to know Lives in the depth of mankind With arms wide open....waiting.... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Who doesn’t want to be loved? Oh God I close my eyes And feel your breath around my smile not only do I love these lines, they are just perfect! Excellent writing Lee. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
damn....and then I will go read it again enjoyed this ms lee j..now that is one fine woman talkin there |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ I think those feelings could be mutual. Good morning sweet. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You elevate the art of "dreamlike thinking" to the highest echelon.  Love & Light, Linda |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful beautiful write here Lee! Now this has to be my favourite!! ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
A Grand slam! Excellent write Lee J. Wow-Wow-Wow!! Very nice indeed! JL |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Who doesn’t want to be loved? Oh God I close my eyes And feel your breath around my smile I loved the same lines as Donna... who'd a guessed  wonderful as always, Lee hugs M |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
LeeJ "Who doesn’t want to be loved? Oh God I close my eyes And feel your breath around my smile" Yes! Understanding this totally...just that way. Gosh, you write so well, my friend!  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a fine piece of you here thanks for sharing |
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