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Open Poetry #34

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~DreamChild~
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since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

0 posted 2004-11-16 11:30 PM

At the end of the river,
the moonlit mouth,
stars dance
on the wake of the sea,
and angels float
upon cloudy boats
on watery skies so deep.

may try to add on to this one.

" Now what do you THINK about that? "

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

1 posted 2004-11-17 12:46 PM

At the end of the river,
the moonlit mouth,

stars dance
on the wake of the sea,

and angels float
upon cloudy boats
on watery skies so deep.

..............
A blank line or two may be
addition enough.

John

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

2 posted 2004-11-17 12:58 PM

DreamChild-

I agree with John. I liked this.. its very calming!

Smile

~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

3 posted 2004-11-17 01:04 AM

ok great! thx.

" Now what do you THINK about that? "

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