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DarkDreamer
Junior Member
since 2004-09-04
Posts 19
nowhere,special

0 posted 2004-11-14 08:12 PM



You’ve been left.
You’ve been right.
You’ve been everywhere,
But up.

It seems like anytime
You love someone else, it’s a crime.
Does anyone really fall in love anymore?
Have I ever felt it before?

I think it’s all some sort of race
To see who can get around with a pretty face.
To see who can keep the emotional pace
Going and going till there’s nothing left to give.

In stead of going left,
In stead of going right,
Why not go straight up
Where I’ve never been before???


© Copyright 2004 kristen williams - All Rights Reserved
Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
1 posted 2004-11-14 08:14 PM


Enjoyed this -  up, a very good place

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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