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Martie
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0 posted 2004-11-13 08:22 PM



For Love has Come Around
(with gratitude and love to my son, Jay, and grandaughter, Samantha, on her third birthday)

     

Covered with Love

Your baby hands were big even then,
big enough to reach out and touch
the place where love is.

You waved them like wings,
trying to capture the light of dust
that slipped around your curved palm.

You opened something with your tiny fingers,
something invisible, made from heaven’s weave,
then you wrapped me in it
and it gave me grace.

Now, with your big blanket of love,
I see you have found the same fabric,
for you cover her with such tenderness that I weep.

I could never find the words to tell you.

Now you know.
(reposted from 11-13-01)

     

My son
I remember when you were two
you tripped over cracks in the cement
with run-down sneakers
sun-drenched hair
the sea in your eyes

you tossed my heart about your youth
as I sang in dance around the room
with you in curl of whirl

amazed

time ticks to fast forward

to you still gleam of smile in me
to watch the tender hand you give

for as you watch me with your child
you tell me how you see now
how I was with you

     

for Love
has come around again
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There is often so much strife in life....I look back, remember...life continues to bless me.  Thank you for reading this repost that gladdens my heart.
© Copyright 2004 Martie Odell Ingebretsen - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-11-13 08:43 PM


And as it is, we are also blessed.
Hugs Martie: beautiful post.
TD

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2 posted 2004-11-13 08:44 PM


Such a treasure.  Keep it forever Martie.
It is golden...thanx for the share of two
of the people that reside within your
heart.

Susan
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3 posted 2004-11-13 09:15 PM


Oh, this plays lovely on the heart strings - so very sweet -

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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4 posted 2004-11-13 09:21 PM


The things that make life worth living....some of them so simple, some not so simple but worth the taking.

Happiness to you and he and to that little angel cadet!

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5 posted 2004-11-13 09:52 PM


You shine, dear Martie.

In this heartfelt presentation, you have just summed up, so poignantly, the continuity and beauty of life.

smile

thank you my friend

You remind me, that even after all the horrors flew from Pandora's box, hope still remained.

*touching the screen*

I soooooooo needed this.

thank you

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6 posted 2004-11-13 09:57 PM


keeping this jewell, to see that smile of yours, the glow of your son's face, the precious babe
thank you, for sharing these moments with us

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7 posted 2004-11-13 10:18 PM


And thank you dear Martie
for sharing this precious part
of your life with us all.
Heart Hugs~Nancy

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me ~

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8 posted 2004-11-14 01:02 AM


Martie - this is simply lovely.  Thank you for sharing your blessings.
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9 posted 2004-11-14 02:05 AM


Such lovely smiles . . .
beget more.
Enjoyed!

e

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10 posted 2004-11-14 08:17 AM


Martie
Each time we make the circles round
We see the moment more profound.
Each time we make the circles round
We see the grace of life rebound.
You are blessed.

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11 posted 2004-11-14 08:21 AM


mmmmmmmmmmm damn what a granny..wink
ms martie she is a doll and I like the new pic of you...hugs lil neighbor.

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12 posted 2004-11-14 08:36 AM


OhSis~
A VERY Happy Birth-of-day to little Miss Samantha~

You ARE blessed ... and your family is doubly blessed with having you~

A joy to read today~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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13 posted 2004-11-14 09:01 AM



All of our babies
grow much too fast...
it was such a pleasure to
snug and cuddle with them, Martie..

well, not Jay, of course...LOL...
just the babies...

My love to Sam on her birthday!

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14 posted 2004-11-14 10:40 AM


*smile*


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15 posted 2004-11-14 10:48 AM


enjoyed
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16 posted 2004-11-14 11:26 AM


"No heart should refuse love
How lucky are the ones who choose love"
(words from an old song)
Your word are lovely to behold, Martie, as are the people in your life.  Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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17 posted 2004-11-14 03:26 PM


Martie, beautiful post...puts a smile on my face!

~Alli~

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18 posted 2004-11-15 03:22 AM


Bless your heart Martie girl, it is so beautiful.  

I have always loved the timeless wonder of your words.

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19 posted 2004-11-21 09:35 AM


this is a treasure Martie as are you and your family - loved this before and still do - hard to believe she is 3 - Paul
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20 posted 2004-11-22 05:03 AM


I can't believe I missed this, jeez, these are just beautiful Martie, you brought tears to my eyes this evening.

Simply beautiful you are.

Mxx

into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread.
~Sarah McLachlan~

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21 posted 2004-11-22 05:06 AM


oh *chills*
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