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0 posted 2004-11-13 04:19 PM



The corridor between silences reverberated rhythmic breathing
Where the mind sculpts sound to form visual speech
And what became the product of each exhaled sigh
Explored with sentient muse

Exclaimed in fondle, from head to sole, her hands uncovered truth
Slender fingers of beguiling thoughts transcended muscle and bone
Seeking the familiar of her dreams, his forehead smoothed from furrow
Her finger play on silken lash and oval, closed his eyes releasing streams in secret

Streams she followed to gently arched and parted petals
Trembling in pursuit of stiffened reticent, now moist with tears
Involuntary tastes of sweet and salt,
The moment pursed in anguished ask me anything, she whispered as she did

Further to the fall of slopes to shoulder length and oh the full expanse of frame
That pounded there beneath her hands, in statement of forbidden lands
Revealing without words the cutting off of river to sea
And holding him so tenderly, breaking sound and every rule

Their touch entwined, and lost became the sculpt of mind
To give its vision raw created in the lay of land beneath His hand
And stepping into twilight, sending loneliness to knees
That filled her with him, leaving room for but a memory of then

Together they learned Braille

Copyright Kkh 11/13/04

© Copyright 2004 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-11-13 04:53 PM


Kathleen~
Oh ... this so reminded me of a friend that I MUST call tonight~
Thank you ... this is touching and so very tenderly portrayed~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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2 posted 2004-11-13 05:24 PM


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3 posted 2004-11-13 05:26 PM


K.  I believe your muse is inspired by who
knows who,  but whoever...doesn't matter.
You are writing at a level above anything
you have written before.  Onward McDuff,
onward...to the stars and beyond.

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4 posted 2004-11-13 07:52 PM


silk

and I love the impact of the final stanza and last line



I just love reading you m'friend.

You make smile those secret smiles...yanno?

Somehow I know you do. Sweet music, Kathleen.

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