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Tequilia_Sunrise
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0 posted 2004-10-19 07:02 PM




This is what I now know: That "Im sorry" is just an expression. That fear is an overpowering emotion. Thatno matter how much you love
another person they can always just walk away. That sacrifice is highly overrated. That waking up and smiling at the person next to you can be a highlight in your heart. That giving away your trust is the same thing as giving away a piece of your soul. That tears of joy can be as painful as tears of sorrow. That a friend is wonderfully real,
but a real friend is utterly wonderful. That there are ways of hurting that seem unimaginable. That holding the hand of that friend can feel like holding the world in your hand.


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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2004-10-19 07:24 PM


An A+ student! you have learned some very important things about life, and I'm glad you are sharing these thoughts.
JamesMichael
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2 posted 2004-10-19 07:53 PM


Nice...James
EvocativeVerse2
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3 posted 2004-10-19 08:05 PM


I love this piece. Of course how could I not. If I said this is what I know. The Oshawa Center is the best place to shop, that GM oft puts the food on the table, and that Lake Ontario never looks fairer then from the park mayhap thee would know me. LOL! Honestly I do love this Tequila Sunrise...and though it has been 5 years since I left Oshawa I still hold home close to the heart.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2004-10-19 08:08 PM


Excellent write..very much enjoyed the thoughts here.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

jwesley
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5 posted 2004-10-19 08:18 PM


Hold that thought the rest of your life and all things will be just that little bit easier to accept.

jwesley

passing shadows
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6 posted 2004-10-19 09:14 PM



Tequilia_Sunrise
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7 posted 2004-10-19 10:12 PM


Thankx for the nice replies and EvocativeVerse2 you are so right and i do love my home town!

bslicker
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state of mind
8 posted 2004-10-20 10:52 AM



bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2004-12-04 11:35 PM


One more time...James
MGROVES
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10 posted 2004-12-04 11:40 PM


packs a wallup  very strong write
enjoyed


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