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LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

0 posted 2004-07-30 06:35 AM

What speaks loudly, behind that unblemished face?
Naked particulars wake, when street lights whisper
Bombed on the lucky one, that one reckless ace
High School singers, holding microphones
Impulse roaming the front lawn
Congenial karaoke looking for me
Infamous hangovers, adjust earthy
Grown from well rounded features
While dust rolls over the big dipper

Sound checks, waiting at backstage doors
Silken sheets become a little soaked
With laced pulsating hysteria
Learning to hate being single-handed
But not hungry

Closing distance with heavy petting
Climbing out some wide mouthed jar
Of sweet summer dreams
Green fools, under orange counties

Like throbbing adult spam
Slapping me hard across the floor
For no reason, I simply don’t care
Can you say, “No Annual Fees”?
Are you the missing link?

Six years of balancing transfers
On the Pennsylvania TPK
I’m bankrupt, and lookin for the linkage
At the bottom of our page
Collecting pink dogwoods

For that white picket fence around our ocean
Slow burning

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

1 posted 2004-07-30 06:56 AM

Closing distance with heavy petting
Climbing out some wide mouthed jar
Of sweet summer dreams
Green fools, under orange counties

Amazing writing, Lee J. I enjoyed
reading very much.
Hugs,
Ethel

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2004-07-30 07:34 AM

LeeJ
Reads like quite a night to me. LOL have a good one.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2004-07-30 08:42 AM

I build castles for a living
grand and tall
and watch the faces of children
when they become knights and ladies
crossing the moats
and leaving the dragons behind

then I wake up
and look around the cave
and see where my firey breath
has burned the moss and roots
and all the children are really in heaven

poems by puff maybe

kewl stuff ms LJ

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

4 posted 2004-07-30 08:49 AM

Six years of balancing transfers
On the Pennsylvania TPK
I’m bankrupt, and lookin for the linkage
At the bottom of our page
Collecting pink dogwoods

For that white picket fence around our ocean
Slow burning

I feel this deeply, LeeJ. Sad, but written
well the sting.
misc'e

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2004-07-30 10:54 AM

You pen such wonderful magic Lee J. Beautiful write.

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

6 posted 2004-07-30 10:57 AM

Powerful images brought to life that pull at the heart...A wonderful masterpiece...

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2004-07-30 11:33 AM

those ending lines...yep...nice

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2004-07-30 11:45 AM

"I’m bankrupt, and lookin for the linkage
At the bottom of our page
Collecting pink dogwoods

For that white picket fence around our ocean
Slow burning"

Excellent write as always Lee.
Love to see things through your eyes.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

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