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Magnus
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0 posted 2004-07-29 09:43 PM


I gave to you the all of me
beneath the elm aside the babbling stream.
I left for you my destiny
as the winds did carry you to my dreams.

A dream of love and passion’s heat
to boil the fires of chilling winter nights.
A dream of hope and wishes three
where once a kiss did fuel the torches bright.

As lovers dance an oaken vat
To sip the cup beneath four shining eyes.
And vines still climb the trellis white
in search the shedding snows from mountains high.

For when the spring brings forth the mist
of morning air and birds that fill the skies,
I’ll give to you the best of me
before the moon awakes to lover’s sighs.

And from this humble best of me
A dream shall come to rest within your breast.
As lovers live in ecstacy
beside the hearth in fantasy and rest.


© Copyright 2004 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
Susan
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1 posted 2004-07-29 09:50 PM


Barry, I sit here and try to think what to say, but it is so hard, for your words carry beauty and the sigh of heart, the romance of lovers, the feel of a warm kiss.  A lovely piece,

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2004-07-29 09:56 PM


There was no way that I was going to miss out on reading the "Best of" YOU!

You certainly do have a way with words!

Enjoy your evening! ~ and your night!
EA

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3 posted 2004-07-29 10:00 PM


sighing here      hugs, Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

Enchantress
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4 posted 2004-07-29 10:16 PM


I'm with my sister here Barry....sighing!!
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Magnus
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5 posted 2004-07-29 10:24 PM


There were two sisters of Sighsville
who sighed at the words his pen wrote.
They were two beauties,  not rivals
living up north,  floating a boat....

They sighed so loud a quake was felt
as far as one could see or drive.
The sound so loud, ice cream did melt
as the temperature went to one oh five.

thanx girs......as always....

Susan,  I am pleased that you have enjoyed
the writings that my mind dreams up and
plasters on the blue walls....with so much
talent at Pip,  it becomes easier...you are
no exception....and I am putting a lock on
all of the knives in my house.....

And Linda,  our resident Angel...thanx
dear lady....I would never miss something
you might have said....

iliana
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6 posted 2004-08-06 02:58 AM


I'm adding another sigh to this list, BJ.  Also, enjoyed your poem to our sisters!   ....jo
BluesSerenade
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7 posted 2004-08-06 03:14 AM


You are one of the best, indeed!

I hope she knows it Barry~  

Startime55
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8 posted 2004-08-07 11:16 AM


Oh yes indeed...You always give the best of yourself and that is what makes you the wonderful person you are...I am glad I didn't miss this one...**hugs** my friend...

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9 posted 2004-08-08 03:45 AM


and I'm proud to be your friend and fellow poet
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10 posted 2004-08-08 12:37 PM


such words...beautiful Barry!

I've tried so hard to tell myself that you're gone though you're still with me
I've been alone all along..Now I'm bound by the life you left behind

hoot_owl_rn
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11 posted 2004-08-09 09:59 AM


a beauty indeed
LeeJ
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12 posted 2004-08-09 10:18 AM


Barry, this was tremendous
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