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Open Poetry #33

drunk lust

mrmojorisin5908
Member

since 2004-05-03

Posts 103
Colorado

0 posted 2004-07-29 10:48 AM

Im drunk...
the philosophy in me was lost
in a trance of fear
come hear
the mill cannot cut
the wind cannot blow
and i'm sitting in a trance

blow me to the past
preceding a futur i cannot reveal
unscrupulous to doubt
in the ways of the dead

Andrew A.
"The road of excess leads to the palace of wisdom." - William Blake

dinky
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 258

1 posted 2004-07-30 06:00 PM

this was really good,
i enjoyed it

"UH de nah nah nah..."

Contabo
Member

since 2001-11-21

Posts 159

2 posted 2004-07-30 08:09 PM

You have a good thought with this...but need to do a spell check.

When the first word is wrong...it kind of throws the whole thing off.

Contabo

mrmojorisin5908
Member

since 2004-05-03

Posts 103
Colorado

3 posted 2004-08-04 03:56 PM

I was drunk when i wrote it, thats why the spelling isnt corredt and what makes the poem have meaning and beauty

Andrew A.
"The road of excess leads to the palace of wisdom." - William Blake

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