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Rick
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0 posted 2004-07-29 07:25 AM



So many delve for things to say
So write of what won’t go away
They find existence in their past
Which haunts so much to ever last

But sometimes we must turn away
And move on with another day
Speak of dreams and lifetime hope
And of the friends that help us cope

For if we live on where is gone
We do not find where we belong
But if we seek with open mind
There may be treasures there to find

© Copyright 2004 Rick Van Weenen - All Rights Reserved
Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2004-07-29 07:27 AM


Rick, I can only say thank you for these words today....did I ever need to read your words of wisdom...
filled with so much hope for a brighter tomorrow.
Thank you, so very much....
hugs.

LeeJ
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2 posted 2004-07-29 07:31 AM


Rick, my elixer for a grand start to the day
How are you, enjoy so reading you
wishing you a wonderful day and thank you for essence at it's best!

Hugs
Me

Rick
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3 posted 2004-07-29 07:33 AM


Gentle Spirit, thank you for your reply, your thanks is so very much appreciated, I wish you well, take care and may you find your treasure.

Sincerely
Rick

Rick
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4 posted 2004-07-29 07:37 AM


Dear Lee, you make my night over here, I am not sure of your time but here it is just after 9.30pm, I am very well dear friend, thanks for asking, I hope you are well, take care and be well.

Sincerely
Rick

passing shadows
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5 posted 2004-07-29 12:24 PM


moving on to another day can mean leaving behind the only thing there is to write about, for me anyway

but I know I should keep the faith of what inspiration tomorrow brings

great write here Rick

Juju
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6 posted 2004-07-29 03:28 PM


I like this poem. Transitions in life are like doulbe edged sword, There is always good things and bad things. I say Putting your old life behind must be tuff too? Hopee the best for you!


Juju

Rick
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7 posted 2004-07-30 07:17 AM


Dear Dixie, you are always going through your heartbreak, I hope one day you will find happiness in now and in the future, believe it or not, this was written for you dear friend, I hope you don't mind.
Be well, be happy and may your muse find your pen and a road to happiness.

Juju, thank you for your reply, putting it behind is hard at times, but time should heal any wound and life must move on, great to see you here, take care till again.

Sincerely
Rick

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