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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-07-29 05:37 AM



There Is No Silence


whisper
and I will hear you
a million miles away
or in a breath’s distance


© Copyright 2004 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-07-29 08:22 AM


yoohoo...wave wave
rattle rattle clang clang
tap tap tap
pssssst nice work slick one

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2 posted 2004-07-29 08:34 AM


Helen, you manage to say so much in so few words!  This was excellent!
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3 posted 2004-07-29 08:48 AM


1slick_lady
And slick is the author. Enjoyed.

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4 posted 2004-07-29 03:01 PM


Beautiful!

Eric

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where the wild flowers grow
5 posted 2004-07-29 03:04 PM


You are brilliant, and I miss you.
Susan
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6 posted 2004-07-29 03:06 PM


Yummy, this is good.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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7 posted 2004-07-29 06:08 PM


.......... shhhhhhh.........


JamesMichael
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8 posted 2004-07-30 07:17 PM


"Nice" in a whisper...James
Paul Wilson
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9 posted 2004-08-01 09:08 AM


Helen...Tender write. Enjoyed. Sounds like this could be the beginning of a real good song...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

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10 posted 2004-08-01 10:48 AM


enjoyed
Honeybunch
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11 posted 2004-08-01 11:33 AM


I must agree that "there is no silence" - well penned.
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12 posted 2004-08-01 12:35 PM


thank you
iliana
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13 posted 2004-08-01 12:54 PM


Wow, this is so profound...I have known the reality of what you say and it was like that....jo
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