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~K~
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0 posted 2004-07-29 02:15 AM


The windshine of a
glossy summer evening
sings of possibilities
and reminds me
of another time
all those velvet nights
we carved our
shadows in the sand
and watched the moon rise
with eyes glazed
in its silver promise
We were midnight confessions
of beautiful tragedies
lost in the myriad acts of creation

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iliana
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1 posted 2004-07-29 02:22 AM


OMG!  This is really lovely!  I'm saving it now to my libary.   ....jo
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2 posted 2004-07-29 02:49 AM


hey, I think you and me'll get along jsut fine around here,

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3 posted 2004-07-29 06:39 AM


you just dont ever seem to let us down
again youve wow'ed me

softly spoken
incredibly touching

LeeJ
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4 posted 2004-07-29 07:37 AM


We were midnight confessions
of beautiful tragedies
lost in the myriad acts of creation


Stunning, this most definately shouts of
those wonderful periods in time which we are named after and you were blessed in receiving.

Very much enjoyed!


serenity blaze
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5 posted 2004-07-29 05:22 PM


absolutely breathtaking...
Jeffrey Carter
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6 posted 2004-07-29 05:24 PM


yeah! What serenity said! Wow!
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