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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2004-07-24 07:02 AM


Changing Rue

I gather dust of changing rue
To write some words to make a coup
Birth before your mind a nova
Add and place a four-leaf clover

If you search the clover bed
You’ll find the living and the dead
Those of past and those to be
It is the green of greenery

Some will search the field in glee
And some must use a Braille to see
And though the field will offer share
You must walk softly and with care

For clover is a common grace
It cleans the air we breathe in place
It also offers food to share
All of which we are the heir

So if you walk the clover fields
Treat them well they are a shield.



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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2004-07-24 07:17 AM


tossing flower in the pan
more than simple "spelling" can--
all you have is all you do--
and should you start? First make a "roux".

"Bed of clover for your head
and daisies dance your eyes" she said.
Kissing him upon the cheek,
she said it's just a "sy" I seek

and would I want some other beau?
I would know how must begun--
I am not a simpleton--
I'm smart enough to love you so...





grins

missed you seymour!

I raise my cup of coffee to you, lovely!



Earth Angel
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2 posted 2004-07-24 07:27 AM


Sweet Sunday morning greetings, Sir Sonneteer!

I'll pick myself up, dust myself off, and dance with you in the clover, Rover!


EA

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2004-07-24 07:51 AM


serenity  
Within this netting we are caught
Until we each our final port.


Earth Angel
I'd love to dance in the clover with you.


Sunshine
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4 posted 2004-07-24 08:38 AM


You may well offer up rue
just don't change the Sy of you...



methinks we're both in the green today...



Good morning, Sy!


Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2004-07-24 08:49 AM


Sunshine
Good morning love.

scorpio
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6 posted 2004-07-24 09:02 AM


Thank you Sy for this pleasant morning walk through green fields of clover.  Beautiful.

believe in what your heart feels...

Janet Marie
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7 posted 2004-07-24 09:09 AM


Birth before your mind a nova
Add and place a four-leaf clover




your couplets of clover make me feel lucky all over. lol
me thinks I'll kiss the poet instead of the blarney stone.

*ww*

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2004-07-24 09:15 AM


scorpio
Always a pleasure to have you read and comment.

JM,
WWRS Your picture is perfect. Will write you some time today.


Enchantress
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9 posted 2004-07-24 09:18 AM


Morning Sy!
Well, I woke up feeling like I was rolling in clover!
And here I find this wonderful write.
Have yourself a good one m'friend.
~Morning hugs and tea's on!~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2004-07-24 09:41 AM


Nancy,
You have just made my day.

iliana
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11 posted 2004-07-24 05:56 PM


Oh, I needed this one.  Thank you!   ...jo
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12 posted 2004-07-24 06:50 PM


Very true words and moral...thanx Sy.
Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2004-07-24 07:39 PM


iliana
Glad you enjoyed, thank you.

Barry,
Thank you my friend.

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