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lgina
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0 posted 2004-07-23 09:01 PM



If only I could hear the sound of your voice.
The words are drifting like the current of a rushing riverbed.
I can see the storm rolling in with unwavering momentum.
The sky is trembling like a hand that has washed away to many memories.
I need to see.
I need to feel.
I need to touch.
The water rushes over my face and soon is at my feet.
The wind is talking to me
Telling me lullabyes of days gone by.
Remembering all the days together and soon I am dry and the breeze is soft.
The day is full and I am wrapped up in the blanket of life with its colors so bright.

© Copyright 2004 lgina - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2004-07-23 09:10 PM


Hello, my friend...I'm so glad to see your first post!  Welcome to Passions!  I know you will be a welcome member.
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2 posted 2004-07-23 09:11 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS

bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2004-07-23 09:12 PM


Igina~



A lovely entry ... know you will enjoy yourself here in this wonderful circle of friends and poets~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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4 posted 2004-07-23 09:54 PM



I very much enjoyed your first post.
Looking forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

iliana
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5 posted 2004-07-23 10:59 PM


This is really beautiful verse, Igina!  Welcome to Passions -- you're gonna love it here!  ......jo
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6 posted 2004-07-23 11:09 PM




Enjoyed your first post!

Sunshine
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7 posted 2004-07-23 11:15 PM


Welcome to Passions!  
Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?  Keeping in mind, I must stand close...

muted
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8 posted 2004-07-23 11:43 PM


Lovely write
and
Welcome to passions!

1slick_lady
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9 posted 2004-07-24 12:49 PM


welcome to...the passion
CMGrimm
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10 posted 2004-07-24 01:51 AM


Welcome to the forums... great first post...hope to see more from you in the future

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions.  - ANON.



Susan Caldwell
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11 posted 2004-07-24 04:22 AM


"The sky is trembling like a hand that has washed away to many memories"

Now that is one cool line! I enjoyed, and look forward to more!

Welcome to pip!

Susan

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Earth Angel
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12 posted 2004-07-24 08:26 AM


Welcome to Passions, Igina! Your poem is full of energy and stirs the senses! A very beautiful write!

I'll be looking out for more offerings from your pen!

Writing

Love & Light,
Earth Angel

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13 posted 2004-07-24 08:38 AM


Welcome aboard, Igina!  I enjoyed reading your first post-nice imagery!
                   misc'e

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14 posted 2004-07-24 08:50 AM


Welcome to Passions.
Your 'blanket' sounds cozy.  

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15 posted 2004-07-24 02:42 PM


Welcome to Passions
I'm glad you came.

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