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devinechild22
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0 posted 2004-07-21 10:38 PM



Why do I love him?
For the same reasons you love storms
He's dangerous and flashy
But he won't hurt you
And there is always a calm
When he has finally rolled over
And his last breaths hover in the air.

© Copyright 2004 Allison Colgrove - All Rights Reserved
Susan
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1 posted 2004-07-21 10:45 PM


Oooh, my, don't we all love a little danger.  Gotta' watch out for the afterburn, though.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Decaflame
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2 posted 2004-07-22 10:13 AM



Well done, m'child.

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2004-07-22 10:48 AM


Oh, yes! ~  I do love storms! ~ and this bit of love thunder!

To Love & Lightening!
EA

LeeJ
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4 posted 2004-07-22 11:46 AM


ahhhhh, how soft and assuring...very much enjoyed!
passing shadows
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5 posted 2004-07-22 12:47 PM


never thought of it that way but yeah...that's it
devinechild22
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6 posted 2004-07-22 04:11 PM


Thanks for the replys. I enjoy the feedback.

                 *Allison*

~~~***~~~Come away with me, Wendy. Come away to Neverland~~~***~~~

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