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Lucie
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0 posted 2004-07-21 10:17 AM


Doesn't matter how much time has passed.
The amount of hurt we both endure.
The directions of the paths we choose.
From love's destiny, there's no detour.

We have both agreed this doesn't work.
"Us" together causes too much pain.
Say goodbye and go our seperate ways.
Just to have our paths cross once again.

I don't claim to understand the stars.
Can not tell where our love ends, or starts.
The only advise that I can give.
Is to follow whats in both our hearts.

© Copyright 2004 Lucille Dobbins - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2004-07-21 10:34 AM


Good advice ~~

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JL
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2 posted 2004-07-21 11:59 AM


Sad!  But very well written and expressed.

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2004-07-21 12:31 PM


I've told myself the same thing
Elan
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State of Wide Eye
4 posted 2004-08-04 03:27 PM


The only advise that I can give.
Is to follow whats in both our hearts.

~*~

Amen.

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Gaia
5 posted 2004-08-04 09:12 PM


You give good, sound advice, Lucie.
And I like this photo!

serenity blaze
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6 posted 2004-08-04 11:00 PM


smiling here, wishing it were all this sensible, but my heart never did listen to my mind.

Enjoyed this much Miss Lucie.

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7 posted 2004-08-04 11:19 PM


If it ends or starts,
Starts or ends,
One thing's for certain
You'll become good friends?

Nice Lucie.

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