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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2004-07-20 01:11 PM

My heart once again wants to touch
that place where we both resided
in such a harmony
that I had never known before,
but that place has been locked away
so deep inside~

no longer can the sun shine through
the darkness of feelings betrayed
and now my heart...

my heart pleads with me
to allow that door to be opened
again
to that place where love~

love was so innocent~

and my soul weeps      with longing
to find      that key
to unlock     that fear
and it whispers to our love
in gentle call~~

                    please, teach me....

{reposted memory...dedicated to all

who have ever needed to know....}

When the rain falls down from heaven, it must be the angels cryin'
For all the sorrow in the world tonight
Pick up any evening paper
Turn on the 10 o'clock news
The devil's been so busy lately
That even God must get the blues
Yeah even God must get...
The blues
{sung by Jodee Messina}

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-07-20 01:16 PM

"and my soul weeps      with longing
to find      that key
to unlock     that fear
and it whispers to our love
in gentle call~~

                    please, teach me...."

Beautiful dear Donna...love this!!
Heart Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2004-07-20 01:24 PM

and my soul weeps      with longing
to find      that key
to unlock     that fear
and it whispers to our love
in gentle call~~

                    please, teach me....
~*~
There are so many ways one can be taught...
if one wants desperately to learn...

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2004-07-20 01:28 PM

Nancy, Kari, sometimes perhaps the answer is found within never wanting to quit learning...
to always move on.
Me and my darn melancholy moments anyhow..

Hugs

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2004-07-20 01:46 PM

nicely done ma'am... to long for such doors to open again is to know that they exist.. and that leaves hope..

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

5 posted 2004-07-20 01:48 PM

oh dear! we both must be sharing the keyhole today!

softly written, and very touching

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

6 posted 2004-07-20 01:56 PM

Not an easy place to be and you wrote it well.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

7 posted 2004-07-21 11:16 AM

as lovely as the poet that penned it....you do a heart good....luv ya

I've tried so hard to tell myself that you're gone though you're still with me
I've been alone all along..Now I'm bound by the life you left behind

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

8 posted 2004-07-21 11:21 AM

You are indeed a Gentle Spirit. Beautiful poetry!

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

9 posted 2004-07-21 11:40 AM

I believe you are also a teacher,
Of many things, real and esoteric,
After all you are a mother and a poet.
This is not to say that any of us
Can not learn more.

Enjoyed the poem

Gloom

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

10 posted 2004-07-21 11:56 AM

Donna, I believe that you, yourself, are a teacher...

Loving hugs,
Linda

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2004-07-21 12:26 PM

beautiful

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

12 posted 2004-07-22 07:53 AM

you guys touch my heart with your words...
thank you so very much for your lifting in care and share....

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