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Amature2
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0 posted 2004-07-14 10:26 PM


Deafening

Inevitably
The one sound I hear at night
Is quietly loud

"Everybody's lost
But they're pretending they're not
Lost"........Morrissey
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wornways
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1 posted 2004-07-14 11:49 PM


  i KNOW that sound! a sort of white noise of the mind, right? i feel this is a very well done senryu because, in only a few words, my mind was brought to bare on something i normally don't consciously notice or think about, but that is still very much a part of my every day existence.

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I no longer ask who I am, or even what I am. It has dawned on me that there are no answers to such questions, except for our feeble-minded notions.
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