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Colors of Love w/ a Twist (reposted for my son)
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Colors of Love w/ a Twist (reposted for my son) |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! 
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My little boy left me a message written in crayon blue He drew a picture of our family and signed it "I luv yoo" I had never been more proud than at that very moment in time The colors of this family's love flow more freely than the sweetest wine As I look around this house at his artwork on our walls I can't help but notice it's everywher even up the stairs and down the hall When I look in every room I see all Crayola's hues But, my mind keeps going back to the refrigerator and his message in crayon blue **************************************** I wish we got to see each other more often, but it makes the time we do get together all that much sweeter!  [This message has been edited by Jeffrey Carter (07-15-2004 03:17 PM).] |
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wornways Member
since 2001-10-18
Posts 204CA, USA |
Is "families" in S2L3 intended to be possessive? (family's) Sometimes I'm a little sad that I'll never have children, but I made my decision about this when I myself was a child and held to it. Always nice to know that some families are strong and healthy. - |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh, this really is wonderful, Jeffrey. Children are so honest, and their love is so very special. Those colors will never fade, you know....~S~ Music washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
This was so sweet, Jeffrey. I hope you save this poem for him and give it to him when he is older. |
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